This is the world sheet copied on here that I took when recieving my feedback after I had pitched my idea to the class.
Feedback
First idea
Its
repetitive and all been done before.
There may
not be enough in the video so need to add another aspect.
Think about
the kind of dance routine and kind of dance that they would be doing. Be more
specific about dancing.
Need to be
more specific and more information.
Need to be
specific and found out when each light would be linked to each sound and how
they
Second one
Maybe add
barbed wire into it so that she seems to be trapped.
Need more
to it. What state she’s in and colour is the DJ alone?
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